Hi @cryptobluebird. As we've explained to you before, the only content that is accepted in The Ink Well is short stories. A short story has characters, a storyline, a conflict that must be resolved, and a story arc. This is an essay about friends discussing music.
Please get to know our community before posting in The Ink Well again. Our community rules are posted at the top of The Ink Well community. Additionally, we have some great resources in our catalog of fiction writing tips to help you learn how to develop characters, and other important elements of fiction. Another way to learn is to read stories by other writers in The Ink Well community.
Good luck!