Hello @darthsauron . It's good to see you back in The Ink Well.
This story is terribly cute and humorous. A wonderful little sci-fi rom-com; perfectly balanced with good narrative and action, and great dialogue. I giggled at the silly puns which were nevertheless quite cleverly constructed.
Your story brought a smile to my face, that hasn't left.
Please remember to support the stories of at least two other writers in The Ink Well for every one that you share.
Thank you so much for your kind words! I love making people happy and the fact that my story made you smile fills my heart with joy. 😊😊