Hi @demmybabs. Thank you for posting in The Ink Well. We have some important feedback for you. First, you must provide the source for your image, with a link to the source. We will not curate your story until you fix that issue.
Please also read read our article on finding grammatical errors in our catalog of storytelling tips. It is important to find and fix errors before posting.
Lastly, please be sure to engage in the community. We expect everyone who posts in The Ink Well to read and comment on the work of at least two other community members for each story you publish. Thank you.