It is a pleasure to read a story in which the author has taken such apparent delight in writing. This narrative could serve as a suggestion for an animated movie...a good one. Your descriptions of the forest creatures are detailed. You bring the whole scene to life for us. We understand that you see these things, and you allow us to see them also.
It is fun that a visit to the dark mysteries of the forest reveals love and friendship, instead of doom.
A great story, and great response to the prompt/skill challenge. Thank you for engaging with other authors in the community.
I always looking forward to your feedback @theinkwell. I am happy that the team behind this community like my story, and you guys even thought it was fit for an animated movie.
I love human kindness and relationship. It is something that instilled with me, and I want it to become visible to my writing. Also, I want to highlight Filipino folklore and culture in this story.
Thank you so much!