This story outlines a surprising turn of events, ending in the beauty of deep friendship. Although your character development and dialogue here are well founded, it would have been nice to see some additional scene descriptions.
It's hard for readers to feel involved when reading stories that are all narrative. You might learn from an article in our catalog of fiction writing tips called Show, Don't Tell, which gives great advice on setting the stage for our tales.
Lastly, you will need to source both of the images you've used before we can curate this piece. We hope this feedback is helpful. Thank you for sharing your story with us, and for your engagement with other members of the community.
I will read the article.. Thank you very much😊😊 and I have sourced both photos. I'm really sorry for the mistake.