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RE: Misadventures in Makeup

in The Ink Welllast year

You use dialogue well to drive home the different emotional responses to the make-up misadventures that befall you/your MC. We see a lovely character arc from experiencing sheer embarrassment, to being mildly annoyed, and finally caring very little for make-up, instead recognising that less is more, and the au natural look is quite flattering. You/your MC realise(s) that being a mom brings perspective. Your opening sentence cuts off mid-sentence but aside from that, your piece is interesting with more than a little depth.

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Thanks, fixed the opening sentence