That was naughty of you. Hope as much as you do that your sister never discovers the truth (and doesn’t read this story).
It’s really hard to write stories about ourselves that don’t show us in the best light. However, these stories often make for interesting publications, which is certainly the case with your story.
Vividly descriptive writing with a perfect tone that suits the subject matter. Well done!
Please remember to engage with other writers.
I really hope she doesn't see it too. Lol.
And yes, I've engaged other authors. Thank you!