Chris took a chance on expressing his feelings to Katherine after 10 years, ushering in a tense transition. The way you develop this situation through the dialogue feels very real. Both Chris and Katherine are detailed very nicely! However, it would have been nice to have some additional scene description to pull us into the plot.
You might learn from an article in our catalog of fiction writing tips called Show, Don't Tell, which can help you learn to reveal details in action. We hope this feedback helps! Thank you for sharing your story with us, and for your engagement with other members of the community.