A very “pretty” piece of prose. However, short fiction is usually elevated by incorporating the classic elements: dialogue, action and narration. Even if you protagonist “spoke” to himself, it would add interest to the story.
The best short fictions also have a strong conflict/resolution type format and although your story does have an arc, it is rather soft and you could’ve made more of it.
Keep up the good work and remember to engage with the community and comment on other stories.