Thank you for your presence in the community and for supporting other writers.Greetings, @elentiyaroberts! Oh how dangerous to feel like an electrical expert - bad things can happen! Thanks for writing this creative non-fiction story.
You might want to check out the material on [Creative Nonfiction (https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@theinkwell/creative-nonfiction-what-it-is-and-tips-for-success) designed to help our writers improve their writing in the genre.
Thank you for reading through and also for the writing tips.