Great imagination throughout your story and the moments of mystery and suspense of the unfortunate and obvious hurt was timely. a great effort in grabbing and keeping readers throughout the story.
Please note, it is worth reviewing your story for obvious spelling and grammatical errors without the use of AI, before submitting, as small errors can be distracting from a lovely story.
Thank you for sharing your story with us, don't forget to engage with other members of the community as well!
Thank you for the tip, I would be sure to edit. And engage in other’s stories.