It is amazing that this legendary object was able to repair the sadness of this family in some small way. Although this tale is interesting, it would be even better if you added in some dialog, and told more of the story in action. We recommend reading our article called Action, Dialogue, and Narrative - The Dynamic Trio for tips on how to add these elements into your stories. Thank you for sharing your story with us, and for your engagement with other members of the community!
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