Thank you for sharing your imaginative story in The Ink Well, @elentiyaroberts. One tip for you: when telling a story from one character's perspective, it's best to stay in that character's perspective for the whole story and only show what they see. It's a bit confusing when the story breaks from the narrative being told by Jade to the perspective of her mother. But it's a nice story
p.s. There are some great pictures of wyverns on Pixabay!
Alright, thank you. I’ll take note of that for improvement.
I used to love and use pixabay but it stopped functioning properly on my phone whenever I search an image it returns a blank page. It works on other devices but mine now.