This is a tender story of a tragic accident and the love of a family, and especially a daughter, who see their mom/wife back to health with her eyes after a lengthy 7 month period. There is a break in logic unfortunately that pulls the reader out of the intimacy of the story as it is not possible to neutralise chemicals in the eyes 7 months after a chemical burn and have sight restored in that way. Be sure to research your stories carefully if you are wanting to rely on medical or scientific facts as the backbone to your story.
Your stories would also benefit from the use of a grammar checker like Grammarly and we also recommend the article, Help for the Grammatically Challenged, which provides important tips on how to use Google Docs to draft your stories. It will point out errors that need to be fixed, and you can fix them by clicking on them.
The Ink Well is devoted to encouraging quality fiction writing and community engagement. You will find if you take the time to improve your writing and fix grammatical errors, you will receive higher curation on your posts.