Thank you for writing in The Ink Well, @eunice9200.
While you have the makings of a nice piece, there were some inconsistencies that you need to address going forward to elevate your work and therefore earn a higher level of curation. eg: The dialogue tags are inserted incorrectly inside the speech marks early in the piece and later treated correctly. Earlier dialogue is also italicised and separated line by line while later, the dialogue switches within a paragraph. The specific part relating to the turtle shows two different versions of the same paragraph which could point either to use of AI/paraphrasing or simply lack of editing of your own work. The presence of these issues make it challenging for the curator to review.
I will take to correction in case of another time, I just joined the community and I wrote this prompt on my own I will follow normal procedure next time