This is a lovely story, @faitz007, and it captures the spectacular feeling one imagines if we could suddenly fly like an eagle and travel through the skies and through the clouds.
Many new writers (or perhaps most) write a story at some point that is too fantastic to believe, or perhaps that does not seem to have a viable ending, and it all turns out to be a dream. We caution writers against taking that approach, in general, because readers often feel as though the story does not end with a satisfying resolution. You can read our article about it in our catalog of fiction writing tips. It's called Don't Use the 'It Was Just a Dream' Escape Hatch.
Thank you for sharing your story in The Ink Well, and for reading and commenting on the work of other community members. Keep writing!
Thank you for the advice😄