hello @favourolayinka,
Welcome to The Ink Well!
The second image in your post is from the freepiks premium library. Unless you can provide evidence that you have the right to use the image, kindly replace it with a royalty-free image before we can curate this piece.
Could you also clarify for us whether this is fiction or creative non-fiction. It is tagged #fiction but reads like a true story. Please adjust your tags if necessary. Can you also confirm which prompt this is written for?
Now that you're here, please have a look around and get to know our community. Here are a few tips for getting acquainted:
Be sure to read The Ink Well community rules at the top of the community home page, and check out our FAQ about The Ink Well.
We accept two kinds of short stories in The Ink Well: fictional stories and creative nonfiction stories. We are all about quality, and we expect writers to carefully review their work before posting. Not doing so will result in low curation rewards or posts being ignored. You can see our article on checking your posts for grammar here.
You can find some great articles on story writing in our catalog of storytelling tips.
You can find information about what we are looking for in creative nonfiction stories in this post.
And please be sure to engage in the community by reading and commenting on the work of other community members. We ask everyone who posts in The Ink Well to read and comment on at least two other stories for each one published.
Again, welcome!
Thank you, Inkwell. I'll do well to read and follow all the community's rules.