This is a satisfying story. Slowly we learn the source of Mary's anxiety. She lost her father at sea. You surprise us with the information about the baby, but the surprise is consistent with the rest of the story. There is a nice arc in the narrative.
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Hello! I'm pleased by reading your comment on my story. I think I had a good time developing it.
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