@gabrieladifazio , you have a perfectly wonderful imagination and the writing skills to capture the readers’ attention, interest and respect. This piece is nail-biting and exciting—we are transported into a terrifying world of monsters’ that seems plausible and “real” in our minds’ due to your expressive, detailed world-building. Wonderfully riveting!
Your dialogue is scintillating, your characters, charming, cunning and “tattooed” with magic.
Quite brilliant.
However, as readers we’re left with many questions that you could’ve offered more resolution on.
Please remember to engage with other members’ of the community.
Thank you very much for your kind words, I am very glad that you found my story interesting.
I agree, I think I might have left some details tied up in this little story to try to avoid generating that feeling of incompleteness, maybe for example the reason why Amber and Trina were there in the first place... I will keep this in mind for a next opportunity, recommendations are always welcome, I like to try to improve every day in this beautiful passion that is writing.
Have a nice day!