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RE: Threads Of Fate.

in The Ink Well4 days ago (edited)

A sweet love-story against the odds. Please do take care in future to proof read your work and edit for inconsistencies, anomalies, spelling, grammar, and punctuation issues. You erroneously started speaking of Raphael as if he was in the relationship with Motilade and it was quite jarring. This would have been an easy pick up if you had taken the time to check through your work before publishing ;-) The Ink Well focuses on quality and expects our writers to do the same. Please confirm once you have corrected your image sourcing so that we may upvote your post.

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Thanks for the correction, I really appreciate it and will work on it.

Raphael's friends actually wanted him to make a decision about keeping Motilade or letting her go, they didn't know what Raphael really wanted. I am sorry my description didn't go well despite going through the story to ensure it's good.

I changed the image since I can't get a link that gives image details from Canva. Thanks.

Thank you for making the changes to your story to improve the quality of the publication and for switching out your image. I think you meant to refer to Emmanuel in your comment as it is Emmanuel and not Raphael who is married to Motilade. We look forward to reading your next submission, @george-dee.