Your story has a great spooky feel to it, @grindan. Perfect for the Halloween season! The tale pays homage to a rich history of stories about dares, kids doing things out of curiosity that get them into trouble, and mysterious characters who turn out to be harmless. This one takes its place in that milieu nicely. Well done!
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Thank you 😁 I'm a total wimp, so channeling some spooky was hard for me 😂 I'm so glad I pulled it off! I appreciate the wonderful feedback