Unicorns bring happiness, and so will your story.
Welcome to the Ink Well. What an auspicious beginning. So many delightful, clever lines in your piece:
The people there are the Inuit, who used to be referred to as Eskimo, and still are by those who are not enlightened. Makookoo was, of course, an enlightened unicorn, as most tend to be.
Most people don’t realize that unicorns are complicated. Many don’t even believe in unicorns, which I think is a bad attitude.
This story would have worked beautifully in our previous challenge: prompt, happiness; skill goal,voice.
As delightful as the whole story is, the voice is really masterful. You manage to keep a nice balance.
As for this week's challenge: Great, vivid descriptions, and wonderful application of 'footprint'.
Thank you for joining us in the Ink Well. It would be wonderful to read more stories from you. We appreciate very much that you actively support other members with your comments.
Thank you. What wonderful feedback!
!PIZZA