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RE: Don't just look at the surface

in The Ink Well2 years ago

she placed her hands on her head in regret.

Nice detail. Not only does she judge the man by appearance, by you describe her appearance at that moment very well. She seems to be an unpleasant young lady. You convey that very well with your description.

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