Welcome, @iamsmaller. What a debut! This story is sophisticated, well thought out and carries a message. You describe your character, and her motivation clearly. You create a distinct, believable universe--essential in science fiction. There is conflict, and tension that rises as Marisa-6's journey to Euphrates approaches.
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Wonderful story. Keep writing!
Thanks for the great welcome. I was nervous posting fiction and I'm happy to see people liked it! :) Everyone is so supportive.