Topnotch. All the better because we don't know how Suet will pay his car debt. We don't know where he will find the money to buy ingredients for his bread. We do know that he was faced with a human calamity: starving children. This was his conflict. Help the children and take a risk in his own life, or turn away. This is the conflict you resolve. Is it not a universal conflict? Is giving not always a choice (perhaps not as grim) between what we can share and what we want to keep?
Thank you for sharing this most affecting story with us. You create a character that is both specific and relatable to the human condition. We appreciate that you engage with other writers in the community.
Thank you for liking my story. I'm grateful for your comment. Yes, I tried to tell this big conflict.