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RE: Time of my life / El momento de mi vida - The Ink Well Prompt #103

in The Ink Well2 years ago

It is a bright sign that George was compelled to ask for more information when he saw the effect the shoes had on Maria! One can imagine that he is in for a lovely experience when he learns about this special time in her life over coffee! The details you add as we get to know the history of these shoes are fabulously implemented! We all want her to win the race, and she does... in her own way. Nicely done!

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In her own way, despite losing the race, she won much more than just a medal. Thank you so much for reading my story.