This is an enjoyable story, @jadams2k18. We are left with a few mysteries, however. What was Erick going to do that Yaneth (also written several times as Janeth) figure out by watching him after he saw the fly? And what was the discovery at the end of the story?
Sometimes, in the attempt not to provide too much information, author's don't provide enough for the reader to fully understand what is happening. (We have an article about this. See Don't Write This Kind of Mystery.
Thank you for sharing your story in The Ink Well and for reading and commenting on the work of other community members.
Hey! Thanks. Well, you remember the princess who kissed a frog and became a man? So, they got divorced 😜😂😂
To me it seems like quite a few clues about Erik's nasty habit and Yaneth's (Janeth, I lost some of the translations along the way) advice about going to Mexico where he won't be judged for eating bugs.
Anyway I will send it to my friends to see if they can understand the story or get lost along the way. I will read your article, it is always important to keep learning 😁