Sensitive, heartbreaking tale and you execute it with masterful precision. Marvelously done.
Cleverly, you plant red-herrings, making us believe that the father has abandoned his family with purpose. When the truth is revealed it becomes one of those pivotal moments in fiction that make the reader stop dead and take note. Truly inspirational.
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Thank you so much.. I appreciate your comment a lot . sure I will. Thank you