This is an intriguing story, @janesuiren. Your scene descriptions are spectacular. One has the sense that you see the scene vividly in your mind as you write. Of course Haliya is curious. So are we. What is the mystery about her husband and the forest. Your conclusion is dramatic and befitting the buildup. Except, we need to know what happened after she discovered her husband was a beast. It's not enough for us to learn the secret. We must learn the consequence she suffers (especially, how does she go on in the marriage) once she learns about the Secret of Tagon.
Thank you for sharing this most interesting story with us. We appreciate that you read and comment on the stories of other authors in the community.
Please Note Your last image does not have a source link. We are sure this is an oversight as your other images do have sources. Please correct that omission. Thank you
I already edit the post and add the link, i forgot to add it because the photo is similar to the first.👍👍
There really was a continuation of this story but i deleted it. I wanted to emphasize Haliya in this story, i know she would love Tagon more when she'll learn its secrets than its beautyThank you @theinkwell