This story is so well crafted that it holds the reader enthralled. Liasha's voice works well. We follow the story line, from the beginning of the siren/dragon romance, to the end, when the two lovers reunite. This is written so very well that it is with reluctance one might suggest a structural flaw: How did the dragon escape his eternal punishment? It's wonderful to see him in the flesh, but how did he get there?
You have a talent for writing. It's a pleasure to read your work.