This is a wonderful story, @jemima1996. It is rich in description and heart. The character arc is extremely powerful. You take the narrator on a journey to self realization.
We ask that writers in the Inkwell read and comment on the stories of at least two other authors in the community. It seems that someone with your insight would have valuable perspectives to offer. Thank you.
Wao, I'm so glad you liked the story, your encouraging words mean a lot to me, it was a pleasure to share it with you.