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RE: The Ink Well Prompt #54 - Better Days Ahead

in The Ink Well3 years ago

This story is rich in tradition. It captures for the reader the the feel of a specific culture. Tomorrow. That is what the story is about. A young man going toward tomorrow, his future and leaving behind perhaps all the richness of the family and village that have raised him. The concern of the father is valid. Will his son be safe, and will he remain true to the values of his family?

This story is well told (even the spit works). Thank you for sharing this with the community. We appreciate that you engage with other authors.