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RE: The Broken Woman (English/Spanish)

in The Ink Well2 years ago

An earthquake and the image of glass about to shatter are the perfect image of someone whose willpower has been broken and who has been subjected to a complacency that denies her own being. We hope that from the fragmentation that Alicia suffers she can recover and put an end to the reality that threatens her. your narrative is very convincing and takes us to the depths of the protagonist's feelings, @jetta.amaya

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Hopefully Alicia will come out of this situation unscathed, but something in her is already broken, let's hope that from those fragments she will build a better Alicia.
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