This is so much fun to read! The tone of the dialogue is particularly perfect. The idea of the detective going in disguised and buttering up the town’s gossips, is imaginative and you’ve done really well to offer the reader a vivid setting and characters that are identifiable. However, you leave the fate of Emma unresolved; we would love to know what was overheard from the recoding.
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Oh, I guess a sequel is in order then.
I supported a lot of members.🤗