You develop Janice's character in a way that we can feel her fears and desires as she pulls the floorboard up. Your descriptive writing evokes vivid images, pulling us into the feeling of amazement Janice has as she spots things like an entire plane in this tunnel! A brilliant yet bittersweet escape. Thank you for sharing this fantastic story with us, and for your engagement with other members of the community.
I'm glad you enjoyed the story. It was a thrill writing it as well. Thanks for the opportunity to make our imaginations run wild as always.🌺