The whole world is understood through legends. Even in the immensity of the sea there is talk of a place of immense riches. Tonia's imagination and courage are the driving force to cross the distance between the two worlds.
Your story is very original and has very good elements of fantasy literature. More detail in the final wording of your story would have made for a better reading process. You might want to go back and reread your story and give enough space to the different actions.
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Thank you very much, would do well to reread and effect corrections