this is the reason why so many earth cultures have so much in common
An intriguing hypothesis. The sense of an impending event grows as the story progresses. There is a strangeness in this place. Pietro wants to discover the mystery of the chamber. It is his curiosity that drives him, without concern for possible danger. The price of knowledge sometimes is very high. The reader wonders if, in the end, Pietro feels he has paid too high a price.
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