The story is about shadow weaving, but you weave your own magic here, the magic of a world well created. Your central character, Dinari, is brave, clever and noble. She not only understands Manak's perfidy, but sees a way to defeating his evil plot. She saves her people.
Your writing skill is topnotch here, @kei2. Thank you for casting us under its spell for just a few moments.
This has got to be the most precious comment I’ve read today. I’m going to save it.
Thank you so much for the amazing feedback.