Most delightful, heartwarming fiction. Your buildup is perfectly developed to reach the dreamed solution. There’s such a well realised underlying tale here that it transfixes the reader :
Was there a deeper relationship?
What hold did the main protagonist have over the queen that she bows so effortlessly?
However, the reader does not need to know the answers because the story is effectively balanced to make them superfluous. Quite brilliant!
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Thanks so much for this glowing comment. I appreciate your kind feedback. 🙂