The story touches all the right notes as it brings us through a peaceful night at home, to sorrow and then to joy. The temptation to use excessive language in this setting is strong. You resist that temptation and the story benefits from your restraint. A well-developed story!
Thank you for sharing your story with us. Thank you for consistently commenting on the work of your fellow authors.
Thank you so much for your encouraging comment and support, as always! 🙂