This is a splendid story, @kemmyb, and flawlessly executed. You throw us a red herring, with the small flirtation between Irvin and Jillian, and we therefor don't see the rest coming. Nice work describing the details of Jillian's upscale life, building suspense, and pulling off a surprise ending!
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What a glowing remark! 😊 Thank you so much for your visit and support.