Joyce's spirit has remained upset because the death separated her from her family and disturbs the new member insistently. Let's hope she finds peace. The truth has helped Grifin understand. You keep a good handle on the tension in the story by using the elements of suspense well. Thanks for writing it and for your commitment to the community, @kemmyb.
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I always appreciate your kind feedback. Thank you!