Chester definitely was not of a mind to heed Frank's warning. Frank is a great character in this story — the long-suffering keeper of access to the manufacturing facility. We would have loved to see his character further developed, or perhaps Chester's. Either one would give us a focal character.
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Thanks so much for your comment. I appreciate your feedback on Frank and Chester as characters and may develop them further in a sequel. 🙂