Although the story does not delve into detail, it points to a forbidden relationship between a young schoolgirl and a male teacher. The suggestion that this might happen, is treading a thin line when it comes to themes deemed inappropriate by The Ink Well. If this relationship were to come to fruition it would constitute an abuse of power, and likely also child abuse. Kindly refrain from writing along such lines. Otherwise, I enjoyed the structure of your story, and the idea at the end that your MC would make some information public knowledge so that her diary had one less burden to shoulder. Your piece could have benefited from some editing to catch issues with mixed tenses, and sentence construction. Thank you, The Ink Well team.
A young school girl and a male teacher? I never made mention of that. Steve is her classmate. I only said she has a favorite teacher without even specifying the gender, which every student does.
I'll keep the editing points in mind, thank you.