This story does a nice job on several fronts, @khoola. You do a marvelous job of integrating action, dialog and narrative (the magic trio for a good story), even though there is only one character. Also, you did a nice job on the world building, giving an action scene in space, with the gravitational pull of the imploding anti-matter, and then the dystopian Zeelis at the end of the story.
The story is a touch hard to follow, maybe because we are not told why the narrator is in this situation and why his mission to return to the Great City fails. Even so, it's a great read!
Thank you so much!
Truth be told I want to start earlier but my vocabulary can't keep up... can't even put to words how he jump off the spacecraft in detail because of the futuristic theme. Keep messing the scenes up 😂.
Thank you so much! I really appreciate all your support!