This is a suspenseful yet humorous story, @lara-bee. It was a very fun read. It seemed something could not be right and that Aminat might be making a big deal about it for the wrong reasons, but we had to keep reading to find out! So it was very compelling. One note, you might want to fix this line:
"Will you marry you?" Chidi asked softly and she said, "Yes".
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