You seem to have a knack for writing fiction and putting your ideas on the page. This story holds the reader's interest. We wonder who is guilty, and about the cause of that guilt. The back and forth between Jenny and Spencer is very good: It is sharp and colloquial.Welcome to the Inkwell, @loveah,
There is a little difficulty in following the time sequence, although in the end we do understand basically what has transpired.
This is an excellent first story for the Inkwell. We encourage you to read our rules and to acquaint yourself with our fiction and nonfiction prompts. There is always something happening at the Inkwell. Please also support other writers in the community by reading their pieces and commenting
Thank you @theinkwell. If I ever have to write a story of this nature, I'll do my best to work on the time sequence.
Yes. I have read the rules. I did a bit of commenting yesterday, I promise to work harder. Thanks for having me.