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RE: Meeting the stranger

in The Ink Well2 years ago

This is a unique story, @loveah. We don't know who this stranger is, or why she chose the narrator as the person she wanted to visit... why she broke into her home and used her soap and cologne. But those details don't seem to matter except as the backdrop to this intriguing tale of a woman who is famous yet lonely, and needs a listening ear.

Thank you for sharing your story in The Ink Well, and for reading and commenting on the work of other community members.

One tip for you: Be sure to check where you put your quotation marks and punctuation. There are several places where the quotes are missing or placed in the wrong location, and where periods are missing at the end of sentences. One example:

"Why did you come here? How did you get in here? I said, my voice trembling."

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Thanks so much for the feedback. I'll try to do better. And I'll pay attention to my punctuations and quotation marks in subsequent stories. Thanks again.