a few hours later I discovered I had been married to the prince of the Marine world.
What a plot twist at the end there, how in the world did he conceal such a vast secret? This story has so many layers of illusions and deceptions, and indeed addresses each of the prompt words. Although your conclusion is interesting, it does not fully answer the qualms that are presented throughout the story.
It is extremely fascinating that our bride did not meet her grooms mother while they were dating, that he has this big secret, and that she moves on to become part of this other world. We hope you will consider adding some dialogue between your characters, as well as some action, as you pursue your love for writing.
These are two important elements of quality fiction that can bring a story to life. You have done a very nice job with the narrative, but it would be even better if you told some of the story in action, and added dialogue so the characters speak to each other. Here are a few resources for you:
Thank you for sharing your story with us, and for your engagement with other members of the community.
I apologize for all the lapses. I'll read the guide you provided to improve my writing. Thank you