You have created a most likeable family. It could have been unrealistic, if you had been less skilled in forming the characters. But you gave these characters life. You gave Mama Nkem a complex personality. She is dedicated, but likes to be quiet, and is often ignored by groups when she is among them. Nkechi is a 'jewel', but still when she gets word about her mother she is conflicted. She would like to receive her degree and make a speech, but does not choose this path. She takes care of her mother.
You do a really good job with the prompt and with the skill challenge. Thank you for sharing this story with us and for engaging with other writers in the Inkwell community.
Thanks so much for the pleasant words. I smile so much when I see your comment down my work, it gives me the encouragement to do better next time.